Need thoughts on two flyers

[Drache]

So I was tasked with making two flyers for the club.

The first is a Flyer we will have on the "Hooligan Hauler" at the local carshow. Now the "Hauler" was an old beater that was given to us and we repainted. We will be using it for any club business until September. At our Swap Meet people will be able to donate money and then be given a small sledgehammer to beat on the car (glass will be removed before hand). The money raised from this will be going towards Muscular Dystrophy (remember Westen?). It's sort of a take on a movie poster....



Here is the "Hauler":



The second is the flyer for the actual Swap Meet in September.



I needed to fill in the black space so I put a "cartoony" version of my Dart in there. I can change this. Also the "watermark" of the program I used will be gone once I buy the program.

[68X426]

Less is more.

Make the font sizes larger maybe, but the empty space is useful as is - it draws attention to the message. When you fill up all the space it can become a mess, not a message (clever, huh? )

[Drache]

Less is more.

Make the font sizes larger maybe, but the empty space is useful as is - it draws attention to the message. When you fill up all the space it can become a mess, not a message (clever, huh? )

The top one will be printed on 8x11" standard paper. The second one will be large and will be posted in store windows.

Not sure what else I can take out of each one to make it less?

[70moparman]

It looks good to me... 

[XH29N0G]

Both are eye catching and would be effective if I saw them. 

Does the first one need information about where and when?

[Drache]

Both are eye catching and would be effective if I saw them.  

Does the first one need information about where and when?

No the grey one is a flyer that will be on top of the "Hauler" at the car show.

Here's the first one redone some more, a friend tinkered a bit:

[XH29N0G]

Both are eye catching and would be effective if I saw them. 

Does the first one need information about where and when?

No the grey one is a flyer that will be on top of the "Hauler" at the car show.

Here's the first one redone some more, a friend tinkered a bit:

OK, I misunderstood.  Looks good.

[Drache]

This is a different Swap Meet flyer a friend helped me on:

[68X426]

Not sure what else I can take out of each one to make it less?

No need to take anything out, just leave as is. As is meets the "test" of less is more.

[tan top]

Not sure what else I can take out of each one to make it less?

No need to take anything out, just leave as is. As is meets the "test" of less is more.

looks good  ,  actually the skull with  pistons , would make a good tattoo , if your into that kind of stuff i think