My Spanish Project

[Lizey]

i felt like sharing it, i had to make a "commercial" for my Spanish 2 class... and well, we waited until the last day. my school thinks its a riot, i dont know figured id post it up get some more mature opinions haha. we have some spanish speaking members, any help on my spanish?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VKM2Wrws5fg

[Khyron]

I'm going to go watch Dora so I can hope to understand anything said in that LOL

[Nacho-RT74]

LOL...

needs some corrections...

You can't say NOS, you must say NUESTRA ( female ) or NUESTRO ( male ) since milk is a female subject in spanish, then you must say NUESTRA

that's just an example... there are several small mistakes like that

I can help you on this if you want...

but a funny project LOL

[Nacho-RT74]

ok, lets continue...

Que barbaridad! Dónde está mi leche ? yo soy triste
must be said
Que barbaridad! Dónde está mi leche ? yo ESTOY triste

Verb TO BE, is SER or ESTAR in spanish. On this case, ESTAR---> Estoy in 1st person

Several mistakes are related on the genere. Milk is a female subject in spanish, so must be called ELLA ( SHE, we actually don't have IT in spanish ), or ESTA ( this ), LA ( the )... all those are female. The milk is LA LECHE... female

EL puede hacer muchas cosas para TU----> ELLA puede hacer muchas cosas para TI

AAAAAH no es bueeenoooo------> AAAAAH NO ESTA BIEEEN, although I think in spanish will be lot phrases better than that one, like AAAAH NO FUNCIONAAA ( IS NOT WORKING )

I guess, the guy is saying YO PUEDO REPARARLO... then says CON ESTEEEE ( showing the milk to fix it )... on this case it must be said CON ESTOOO.

then says ES BIEN ( after fill the tank with milk LOL ). Actually the correct way to say it is LISTO! ( READY! )... you in English say a lot the OK for everything, but in spanish OK ( to say it's fine ), is not correct in all situations

When are talking about shoot the milk with the gun... you are saying CON ESTE... must be said CON ESTO... I already made mention to the NOS--->NUESTRA mistake before ( on same phrase )

ANTES TOMO' NOS LECHE---->ANTES DE TOMAR NUESTRA LECHE... ( same with DESPUES )

Last sentence:

must be said/spell LA LECHE DE LOS TOROS BOLIVIANOS

( OK... I don't want to imagine trying to get the milk from a Bolivian BULL LOL )

[Khyron]

who knows.... he may milk a bull, but that would be a differnt kind of Video

[mikepmcs]

I thought it was great.  Very creative. 

[Lizey]

LOL...

needs some corrections...

You can't say NOS, you must say NUESTRA ( female ) or NUESTRO ( male ) since milk is a female subject in spanish, then you must say NUESTRA

that's just an example... there are several small mistakes like that

I can help you on this if you want...

but a funny project LOL

thanks a ton!! haha, all good stuff to know!
and yeah, we were only in our second year of spanish when we made it, but we havent learned any more than we knew then! haha so any corrections are much appriciated!
and the bolivian bull thing...well we needed a "product" to sell and thats what we came up with. it didnt have to make sense haha.

[twodko]

I have enjoyed this entire thread! There's only one Nacho and this site wouldn't be the same without him! Good job Lizey et al. 

[GunMetal]

I have enjoyed this entire thread! There's only one Nacho and this site wouldn't be the same without him! Good job Lizey et al. 

but my head still hurts trying to follow along.

[Nacho-RT74]

I have enjoyed this entire thread! There's only one Nacho and this site wouldn't be the same without him! Good job Lizey et al. 

but my head still hurts trying to follow along.

on this thread or usually ? LOL sorry

well, on this thread I made corrections step by step on video... as soon I noticed something needing correction, I paused and wrote in here. Maybe you can't follow if you are NOT in the video...

Maybe If I state the time when it happens will be hepfull

( along with... I'm concious I still need to work in my english LOL )

[Nacho-RT74]

BTW, actually this symbol ' is something "unnoficial" in spanish like you use in english on I'm, weren't or we're etc or when you use it in case of a property with the s ( 's )... it's more used for some specific slang shorcut/abreviation or regionalism, but actually not regulary used on the perfect and correct spanish like it's correct in english

I meant because when you used on the

ANTES TOMO' NOS LECHE

what is not right not just because the NOS use, like also the '. You'll never will find that symbol used in the correct spanish